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What makes a good college essay? It’s a question many high school seniors ask while going through the application process. A winning college essay engages admissions officers and shares with them the student’s identity and personality, painting a picture that goes beyond grades and test scores—compelling the reader to become an advocate for the student’s admission. 

The Four Core Questions are at the heart of college essays and answering them is critical. Those questions are: 

• Why am I here?
• What is unique about me?
• What matters to me? 

By answering these questions, a student is able to share information that is otherwise hard to ascertain with admissions officials—things like personality traits, personal journey, interests, skills, and ambitions. A well-conceived and well-written essay is a way for students to separate themselves from other applicants; conversely, an ineffective essay does nothing to distinguish a student, which is why it’s so important to avoid writing a cliché college essay. 

Cliché College Essay Topics to Avoid + How to Fix Them

1. résumé of your life and achievements.

Résumés are an effective method to demonstrate achievements, but they’re boring to read. This is why, in the professional world, résumés are often accompanied by a cover letter. A college application is essentially a student’s résumé—it contains their grades, test scores, and extracurricular activities—which makes an essay listing achievements redundant. 

A better strategy is for students to pick one experience that stands above the rest and write about how it shaped the person they are today. This is especially effective for any experiences that would benefit from further explanation, or those that have an interesting backstory. For example, maybe you participate in a unique extracurricular that most people aren’t familiar with, such as being on a Chinese yoyo/diabolo team. You might choose to focus on that aspect of your identity and what it means to you. Or, maybe you love math, but never had the chance to explain on your application that you used to hate math, until a tutor showed you a different way to appreciate it (and that’s one of the reasons you want to become a math teacher). This would be another strong topic.

You don’t necessarily have to focus on one specific event, but your essay should be cohesive. Another traditional essay structure is telling a narrative over an extended period of time. This structure incorporates a handful of different experiences that are joined by a common thread. If you have a story of growth, change, or development, this is the classic essay structure for you. An example of this might be a football player who was embarrassed to admit he liked writing and poetry, but how he eventually became a published author, and came to accept and own his identity as a poet.

2. Sports injury, challenge, or success

Coaches on every level are known for telling their athletes about how the lessons learned on the field/court/ice translate to life. Unfortunately, these lessons and stories have been told in numerous movies and books, along with countless college essays

To successfully write a college essay about sports, it’s important to steer clear of the common themes.

• Overcoming adversity
• Trusting teammates
• Refusing to quit
• The thrill of victory
• The agony of defeat

For example, instead of an applicant talking about how their team trained and improved to beat their rivals or win a championship, they should write about a unique way that sports shaped who they are. For example, here’s an unexpected way to write about a sports injury: maybe tearing your ACL in a soccer game actually led you to start a podcast while you were recovering, which became one of your biggest passions. 

Along a similar line, a student could write about discovering their motivation for playing sports.  Maybe they always played basketball because they were good, or their parents expected them to play, but they realized they didn’t enjoy the competitive nature of the sport and wanted to gravitate toward less competitive activities like hiking or surfing. 

3. Immigrant story

The U.S. is a nation of immigrants and while not every student has an immigrant story, a lot of them do. Consequently, these immigrant themes are ones that every admissions officer has read before:

• Learning a new language
• Adapting to new customs
• Adjusting to a new lifestyle
• Struggling to fit in

Asian students, in particular, should avoid immigrant-themed essays, as they have a harder time getting into college due to demographics, and this topic only calls attention to their background. 

To make an immigration essay work (and avoid being another cliché college essay), a student needs to make it extremely unique or incredibly personal. One tactic is to write about a singular experience—moments of conflict are always an interesting topic. For example, a student might write about a time they were made to feel unwelcome in the U.S. and how they responded to that moment, such as volunteering at the community cultural center or creating a welcoming committee for new immigrants. 

Another essay opportunity is to write about an experience that is truly unique. Perhaps, when a student first came to the U.S., they didn’t have access to a vehicle or public transportation and needed to walk to school or their job. That student could use their college essay to focus on what they learned on their walks and the ambitions it sparked—such as tenacity to succeed against all odds, or a desire to found a program for immigrants in a similar position.  

4. Tragedy – death, divorce, abuse

Tragedies are formative experiences, which in theory make them a natural theme for a college essay; however, tragedies are often a universal experience. Furthermore, essays on this topic are too often centered on the tragedy itself, rather than the applicant.

It is possible to write a college essay about a tragedy that isn’t cliche, however. The key is to keep it focused on the applicant and highly personal. To start, avoid overused themes like “life is short” and “make every day count.” Instead, highlight how the tragedy affected the writer. For example, if you had a friend who passed away from substance abuse, an essay centered around your subsequent commitment to drug prevention programs and advocacy is an interesting angle. 

In the case of an applicant who had a parent pass away, writing about shifting family dynamics, new responsibilities, and increased challenges are all great themes. For example, a student went from worrying just about academics to becoming the other adult in the house—preparing meals for their siblings, sending them off to school, and helping them with their homework.

5. Working hard in a challenging class

Working hard in a challenging class doesn’t work as an essay topic for a handful of reasons. If you’re applying to a highly ranked institution, it’s likely that most of their applicants took tough classes and worked hard. They also likely faced challenging classes, struggled, and ultimately succeeded. Another reason to avoid this topic? The traits conveyed are likely covered by recommendation letters: 

• Perseverance
• Work ethic 
• Intellectual ability

Instead of writing your essay about overcoming a tough class, think about the personality traits you want to highlight. If you feel that your determination is already covered in other aspects of your application, pick another trait to feature in your essay. Or maybe, you feel like your determination isn’t emphasized enough. Which other experiences highlight this trait?

Another idea is to make the essay less about the class and more about the writer. Instead of sharing how you struggled to understand Crime and Punishment in your advanced lit class, you might detail how the class inspired a desire to write, or how the works covered made you reflect on your own life. 

You could also pick a problem or research question you want to solve, as per the fourth Common App essay prompt. Just remember that while the topic is an intellectual problem, your essay should still highlight your personality, identity, and way you think about the world. Pick something that is deeply personal to you and your background. For instance, maybe you want to create a proposal to solve food deserts in your county. This would allow you to share your personal experiences growing up in a food desert, your passion for increasing access to healthy food, and your analytical abilities.

6. Someone you admire (a person you know or historical figure)

The primary pitfall of writing about an admired person is that the essay is often focused more on the other person than the applicant. Even if students steer the essay toward themselves, they usually find themselves covering familiar themes:

• Learning something about themselves
• Learning something about life
• Learning something about the world

The key to keeping writing about another person from becoming another cliché college essay is to keep the focus on the applicant. A great way to do this is to highlight a specific moment where they exemplified an attribute or action that they commend in a person that they admire. For example, if an essay writer admires their father’s ethos of standing up for what is right, an excellent essay theme is the time they stood up for another student who was being bullied, even though they knew they risked losing popularity, or finding themselves in the crosshairs of the bully as the result. 

If the person they admire is historical, they can talk about how they are trying to live their life according to those ideals. For example, the aspiring writer can focus their essay on how they adopted Hemingway’s ritual of writing every morning as soon after first light as possible, and what they’ve learned from that process. 

7. Volunteer trip

Building a winning essay about a volunteer trip is tricky—at best, these essays come off as cliché; at their worst, they can make an applicant seem pretentious, condescending, and privileged. Like other topics, the key is for the writer to focus on themself, not the group they volunteered for or the place they went. 

One way to avoid the cliché volunteer essay is to write about a specific moment on your trip, rather than giving a chronological account of your time. Get really specific and bring the reader into the moment and share with them how it affected you. An attention-grabbing essay will show the reader how you changed, instead of telling them. 

Another trick for turning volunteer essays from cliché to eye-catching is focusing on an unusual experience that happened during the volunteer trip. For example, a delayed flight while travelling home that left you stranded in a foreign city all alone and how it’s a parable for stepping on campus for the first time.

8. Moving to a different part of the country 

Similar to the immigrant story, writing about moving to a new place is also an overly-done topic. Countless students move or switch schools each year. Many have trouble fitting in or adjusting to a new place, but eventually make new friends. 

If moving was really integral to your high school experience and identity, think about why that is. Did it push you to try new interests or become more outgoing? Focus your essay less on the move itself and your adjustment, and more on how exactly it changed your life. 

For instance, some more original ways of spinning this topic would be:

• How moving led you to start an organization that picks up unwanted furniture for free, and resells or donates items in good condition. For items in bad condition, you find ways to repair and upcycle them. This was motivated by all the trash you saw your family produce during the move.
• At your new school, you joined the gymnastics team because you were known as the uncoordinated, awkward girl at your old school, and you wanted to shed that image.
• After moving, you decided to go by the proper pronunciation of your Spanish name, rather than the anglicized version. You could write your essay on why you made this decision, and how it impacted your experience in your new community.

9. Your religious institution or faith

Religion is generally a very tricky topic, and it’s difficult to cover it in an original way in your essay. Writing about your faith and reflecting on it critically can work, but basic religious essays about why your faith is important to you are a little more clich é . 

It’s important to also remember your audience. If you’re applying to a religious school, essays about your faith will likely be expected. If you’re applying to a super liberal school, you might want to avoid writing your essay about your conservative religious views.  

Regardless of your situation, if you decide to write an essay on religion, share your personal relationship with your faith. Anyone can write broadly about how much their faith means to them or how their life changed when they found religion, but only you can share your personal experiences, thoughts, and perspectives.

10. Romantic relationships and breakups

Your college essays should be personal, but romantic relationships and breakups are a little too personal. Remember that applying to college is kind of like applying to a job, and you want to present yourself in a professional light. This means that writing about your romantic life is a bad idea in general. 

Unlike the other clich é topics, there are not really any directly-relevant alternatives. If you wanted to write your essay on your relationship, think about what traits that story would’ve brought out. For a breakup, was it your ability to overcome a setback? For a happy relationship, is it being emotionally intelligent or finding a compromise during conflict? Think about how you could still write an essay that conveys the same aspect of your identity, without mentioning this cliché topic.

11. Family pressure to pursue a particular major or field

Many students unfortunately experience family pressure to do certain activities or choose specific career paths. If this is the case for you, you shouldn’t focus your essay on this topic—it will only make it look like you lack independence from your parents. This is not a good sign to admissions committees, as they want a campus full of students who have the autonomy to make their own decisions. 

That’s not to say that parental input isn’t valid—you may have very legitimate reasons to follow your parents’ advice to pursue a particular career, especially if your family is low-income and you need to provide for them. But there are absolutely better topics to share your identity and background, beyond parental pressure.

Some ways to make this topic more original are:

• If you have strict parents, discussing how you became more independent from them, and an example of when you did something for your personal development that they might not have agreed with at the time.
• For those whose background influenced their decision to choose a “practical” field, you might talk about your situation growing up and how that influences your perspective and choices. Of course, you should still try to show genuine interest in your plans, as you don’t want to make it seem like you’re being “forced” to do something. 

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How to Avoid Clichés on the College Essay

Crafting a college essay can be challenging as we often grapple with numerous notions of what constitutes a good essay, making it difficult to generate our own unique ideas.

However, the task of avoiding clichés, fortunately, tends to be a more straightforward endeavor.

We have curated a list of the six most frequently encountered clichés that frequently appear in our students’ essays. Read them and ask yourself, “Does my essay contain any of these Clichés?”

1. The Dictionary Opening

You might think that using intelligent-sounding words will show how intellectually capable you are, but the reality is that admission officers can tell that it’s not authentic. An example of this is:

“Webster’s Dictionary defines ‘passion’ as…”

Avoid this at all costs.

2. The Deep Quotes

If you must use a quote, pick one from someone important in your life instead of some random dead person, nobody knows.

“The man who moves a mountain begins by carrying away small stones.” ~ Confucius

Don’t integrate quotes in your essay as a way to sound deep and sophisticated. Again, the Admission Officers can tell.

3. The Vague Goal

This cliché is a classic one.

“I’ve always known, from the time I saw a keyboard, that I wanted to be a programmer.”

The tactic to strengthen our ambitions by linking them to a deep history, usually located in some far-away childhood or “ever since I can remember.” does not impress admission officers.

Try to create a story about why you chose to pursue the goal rather than resorting to the vague goal tactic. This will result in a far more profound piece.

4. “Going Meta” & Taking Wild Swings

Sometimes students believe so much in their writing ability that they become “too creative for their own good” and ultimately belly-flop. An example of this is:

“Was your childhood home destroyed by a dormant WW2 bomb? Yeah, neither was mine. I know that intro might have given the impression that this college essay will be about withstanding disasters, but the truth is that it isn’t about that at all. In fact, I am going to talk about X…”

The idea is, usually, that by calling attention to the convention of the college essay, one can speak more directly to the admissions committee on the other end. The vast majority of attempts will come off as condescending, rude, or flippant – and admission officers HATE it.

It’s better to focus on telling a real story. Don’t neglect the task by trying to be clever; lean into the opportunity to tell a committee about yourself.

5. Broad Conclusions

This one is very popular.

“So, in the end, it’s clear that we should settle our differences with our opponents and listen with open hearts.”

The college essay is about specificity as it relates to you and your life, not about big conjectures and broad realizations.

Don’t make your essay into a plan to solve the world’s problems – make it about how an experience taught you something specific.

For example, if you’re planning on writing about the trip you took to some country, write about a difficult or challenging experience, and explain its significance in terms of how it changed your thinking about community, culture, etc.

6. The “Aha!” Moments

The idea of a single moment of revelation is in itself a cliché.

“I realized in that moment that just as the shabbiest objects can become the most exquisite paintings, true insight can come from the most unexpected of places.”

Did you really realize what would alter your life in a split second, or was it the digestion of an experience over time that helped you “realize” something?

Talk about the process of coming to a belief, not merely about the belief itself.

Crafting a unique and engaging college essay requires the avoidance of common clichés that can undermine your efforts.

Focus on providing personal insights, sharing meaningful experiences, and conveying the narrative that defines who you are. Embrace the opportunity to express yourself authentically and leave a lasting impression on the admissions committee.

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17 Common College Essay Cliches To Avoid at All Costs

Applying to college can be stressful, and many high school seniors struggle with the essay portion of their application process. The best college essays interest admissions officers, stick out from the crowd and provide information about who the student is and how they’ll thrive on their new college campus. With that being said, let’s look at some common college essay cliches you’ll want to avoid if you want admissions officers to remember you. 

Here are 17 common college essay cliches to avoid at all costs: 

• Writing an essay about the lessons you’ve learned in sports
• Summarizing your accomplishments
• Focusing on volunteer experiences and/or mission trips 
• Raving about your personal hero
• Writing the “death that changed me” essay
• Telling the admissions team about your epiphany
• Providing way too much information you shouldn’t share
• Starting with a quotation
• Using your immigrant story without making it interesting
• Pointing out that your a child of divorce
• Writing the “challenging class” essay
• Telling your moving story
• Focusing too much on faith
• Writing the “finding yourself through travel” essay
• Including your cute childhood story
• Starting your essay with a dictionary definition
• Including your vague “since childhood” career goals

The rest of this article explains why these topics are cliche and offers suggestions of what to write about instead. Keep reading if you want to feel more confident about your college applications! 

1. Writing an Essay About the Lessons You’ve Learned in Sports

If you’re a serious athlete, this may be tough to hear. Yes, the lessons learned through playing sports are often applicable in real life, but this is also a cliche in movies, tv shows, and, yes, college essays. Admissions officers have read thousands of essays about the camaraderie and teamwork of a sports team, never giving up even when faced with a challenge, and how “it’s not about winning or losing.” 

Sports essays are often predictable, making them boring to read, especially for admissions officers who are reading hundreds of essays a day. Unless you have a particularly unique or incredible story, it’s probably best to avoid writing your college essay about sports ( source ).

2. Summarizing Your Accomplishments

Even if you’ve accomplished a lot, nobody likes a braggart. All your accomplishments can likely be found elsewhere in your application, so there’s no reason to waste your college essay summarizing these. Just listing everything you’ve done without describing what your accomplishments mean to you or what you’ve learned is pointless and will bore the admissions officer reading your essay.

3. Focusing on Volunteer Experiences and/or Mission Trips 

If you’re writing about an experience you had volunteering or on a mission trip, you’re likely to stray into dangerous territory, in which you spend most of your essay talking about how amazing you are and what an angel you are, which may put a bad taste in your admissions officer’s mouth. You may even come off as naive and privileged.   

If you do choose to discuss a volunteer experience, avoid describing what you brought to the table and instead talk about someone you met who changed your life or something unexpected that happened. Or, if your volunteer experience incited a new passion or inspired a new career path, write your essay about that. 

4. Raving About Your Personal Hero

Look, it’s great that you love your mom, and she inspires you. It really is. But many people’s moms inspire them, and they’ve written their college essays about that, too. Swap “mom” out with “dad,” “grandparent,” “sibling,” or even “Albert Einstein” or “Amelia Earhart” or another public figure, and you’ve got some pretty cliche college essays. 

Unless your personal hero is extremely unexpected or someone with a unique life story, try to avoid writing this kind of essay. 

5. Writing the “Death That Changed Me” Essay

Experiences with death inevitably impact us and can even shape our worldview and change our lives. Even though your grief after losing a pet or a loved one is unique to you, the broad lessons learned from grieving are pretty universal. Yes, life is short. Yes, you should live every day like it’s your last. Yes, you should tell the people you love that you love them because you never know what could happen. 

These are important lessons. However, college admissions officers have probably read thousands of essays about these lessons. Even though the death you experienced may have been a formative experience for you, it may not make for a memorable essay unless you can write about it in an intriguing way.

6. Telling the Admissions Team About Your Epiphany

If you find yourself writing the phrase, “Suddenly, I realized…” in your college application essay; it’s time to stop writing and reconsider. 

Usually, the epiphany you’re writing about is a reach from the struggle you went through or experience you had, and admissions officers see right through it. These essays often feel forced or read like a simple “moral of the story” children’s television episode. 

It’s best to avoid “lesson learning” language in your college essay because it cheapens your writing ability. 

7. Providing Way Too Much Information You Shouldn’t Share

Your college essay isn’t a confessional, and it’s not an appropriate place to get too personal. Overly personal topics reveal that you don’t understand boundaries, which isn’t ideal for a college community. 

If your essay topic isn’t something you’d talk about with a stranger you met on a park bench, you shouldn’t be talking about it with your admissions officer. Unfortunately, many students write about these topics in an attempt to stand out, so now not only are they inappropriate, but they’re also cliche. 

What’s too personal? Here are a few examples of topics that may be TMI for your college essay ( source ): 

• Anything about your sex life. Writing about your sexual orientation or your coming out journey may be okay depending on how you write about it, but don’t talk about your sex life in too much detail. 
• Your romantic life. Your relationship may be really important and unique to you, but the stranger reading your college essay isn’t interested in this part of your life.  
• Illegal activity. Discussing your criminal history may help you stand out, but not in a good way. 

8. Starting With a Quotation

You have a word limit when writing your college essay, so don’t waste space using someone else’s words. Chances are if you’re inclined to use this quote, a bunch of other applicants were inclined to use it as well. It’s a cliche and boring way to start your essay, so avoid it at all costs. Instead, spend time making your first sentence so good it reads like a famous quote! 

9. Using Your Immigrant Story Without Making It Interesting

The United States is a nation of immigrants. Not every applicant has an immigrant story, but quite a few do, and the themes are the same for most immigrants. Admissions officers have read many essays about the challenges of learning a new language, culture shock, and struggling to fit in. 

Immigrants can still write about their experience in their college essay, but try to avoid these common themes and instead focus on a particularly unique or unusual aspect of your personal story ( source ).

10. Pointing Out That You’re a Child of Divorce

Lots of people have divorced parents. While going through your parents’ divorce may have been a uniquely challenging experience for you in your life, it’s not necessarily a unique experience in general. Ultimately, this topic is just too common, and your admissions officer will likely immediately lose interest. 

11. Writing the “Challenging Class” Essay

Being a hard worker is a great quality in a college applicant. However, many students have worked hard and done well in a challenging class as a result of their struggle. Additionally, the traits illustrated in this type of essay, such as work ethic, diligence, and perseverance, are most likely traits that your recommenders will write about in their letters. 

Furthermore, you may be putting yourself at a disadvantage by admitting that a particular class was hard. If you’re applying to be a math major at a highly ranked institution, writing about how difficult your high school algebra class was may not be the best way to demonstrate your academic capabilities. 

12. Telling Your Moving Story

Moving to a new place is tough, I get it. However, countless students move or have to switch schools mid-year. Not to mention that moving is a fairly common theme in many high school movies and tv shows. You moved, you struggled to fit in initially, but you eventually made new friends . It’s cliche and predictable. 

If moving impacted you significantly, reflect on why that’s beyond the cliche outlined above. In your essay, focus less on the move itself and more on how you changed. 

13. Focusing Too Much on Faith 

Your faith may be extremely important to you, and that’s great. However, religion is a tricky topic, and it’s difficult not to fall into cliche language and themes when writing about faith in a college essay. 

Essays about faith are also a bit of a catch-22 because if you’re applying to a religious school, most applicants writing essays for that school are likely to discuss their faith. If you aren’t applying to a religious institution, and especially if you’re applying to a liberal school, writing about your relatively conservative religious ideas and practices may put you at a disadvantage.

If you truly believe that writing about your faith is the best way to reveal to admissions officers who you are, try to focus more on your relationship and experience with faith and less on broad ideas about faith, as those are universal and cliche themes in college essays.  

14. Writing the “Finding Yourself Through Travel” Essay

Your trip abroad was probably amazing, and there’s a good chance it did change your life. However, these stories are common in college essays, and it’s likely that another applicant went on a similar trip and learned similar lessons and wrote about it. 

Your international travel story would become even more cliche if your travel was cliche or inauthentic. Don’t try to write an essay about how you learned so much about Mexican culture during your stay at an all-inclusive resort in Cancun. 

15. Including Your Cute Childhood Story

Almost everyone has a cute anecdote from their childhood that they can share. Your funny or adorable tale from your childhood may seem unique and special to you. Still, admissions officers are likely to disagree, as they probably read a similar story three essays ago. 

Additionally, is that cute story about something you did when you were six really how you want to present yourself to a college admissions committee? 

16. Starting Your Essay With a Dictionary Definition

It’s a cliche in wedding toasts, and it’s a cliche in college essays – dictionary definitions aren’t fun or interesting to read. In most cases, the admissions officer knows the general definition of the term you’re defining. 

Or, if you’re defining a super obscure word that the officer wouldn’t know, likely, this word doesn’t actually have any personal meaning to you. Once upon a time, this may have been a unique way to start an essay, but it’s overdone now. 

17. Including Your Vague “Since Childhood” Career Goals

“Since the time I was old enough to hold a book, I’ve known that I wanted to be a librarian.” This is a very cliche college essay intro, and it can be applied to any profession. If you’ve known what you wanted to be since you were a child, congratulations! 

Don’t start your college essay with this; and instead, focus more on why you want to be in that profession. Writing vaguely about what you want to be and why is overdone and boring, especially if it’s rooted in some childhood anecdote. 

You can write about your career goals, but make it more meaningful by rooting your goals in current events or your personality now, instead of your personality when you were a child.

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Emily is an engineer at a Fortune 100 company. Her degree is in Chemical Engineering with minors in Mathematics and Chemistry. She completed 4 internships in college and graduated Summa Cum Laude in 2020. She is from Texas and currently lives in Seattle, WA. Emily loves hiking, traveling, and playing guitar. She is a very proud dog mom to her fur baby, Oliver.

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5 college essay clichés you should avoid.

By  Albina Welsh

According to Your Dictionary, clichés are overused expressions. Their continued use is trite. They do not add value to an academic essay or a personal statement. For your paper to be smooth, interesting and superb, avoid using essay clichés. This article identifies college essays clichés and explains how to avoid them.

Common essay clichés to avoid To understand the common clichés to avoid, you need to identify different types of writing genres where you can find them. Examples of these genres are academic writing, application essays, book reviews, etc. Students are vulnerable to using different essay clichés to different types of writing genres. Therefore, you need to identify the genre of your text, before looking for the clichés that may make your essay to appear vague.

There are circumstances you may fail to identify these clichés. If you are faced with such a situation, get assignment help. Nonetheless, the following are some 5 college essay clichés that may make your academic paper lack credibility: In other words: This is a cliché that is common in college academic papers. When using this cliché, you are in danger of repeating yourself.  This is a phrase that is used to provide a simpler explanation of a concept that is contained in the text. Overusing this phrase will make your paper boring. Furthermore, the sentence that contains the phrase will have an obscure meaning.                   First and foremost: Overusing this phrase in your sentence will make you look lazy. A person reading your text containing this cliché will conclude that you are not creative. They will lose interest in reading it further. Professional writers know how to limit the use of such phrases. As a matter of fact: This is an expletive phrase. These are phrases that do not add any meaning to your sentence. It is good to avoid this phrase because it dilutes the quality of your text, and the ideas contained in it. As a professional writer, I strongly discourage you from using this phrase. It will make your paper look unprofessional.

In light of this: According to the Collins English Dictionary, this is a phrase that has a number of synonyms. Examples of its synonyms are: considering and taking into account. You can use these identified alternative phrases in your paper. The use of these alternative phrases will prevent you from overusing the identified cliché.

It is an obvious fact: Try to avoid using this phrase when talking about issues that are obvious or factual. A good example is a sentence such as “It is an obvious fact the sun is a star”. The use of this phrase makes the sentence to be wordy and vague. Just write a simple and easy to understand a sentence like: “The sun is a star”. Well, these are the most common college essay clichés you can find. For your paper to be flawless, smooth and interesting to read, avoid them. However, it is not enough to know them. Below are some of the ways you can avoid using them in your essay. How to avoid the identified college essay clichés

To avoid the essay clichés, you need to follow these simple rules. Identify the unique angle about the cliché: Identification of a unique angle is important because it helps to make an uncommon point about your cliché. This result in a fresh and creative sentence.          Also, be specific: Essay clichés can result in the creation of a wordy sentence or paper. To avoid them, you need to be specific when talking about issues or facts being addressed in your paper. Do not forget to proofread your paper: When you proofread your paper, chances of identifying and removing essay clichés are high. This is a process you should not ignore. Ignoring this process will make you vulnerable to writing a paper that is full of grammatical mistakes. Moreover, these papers will contain essay clichés that make it dull and lack originality. Well, the above steps will make you produce a paper that is free from college essay clichés. Papers containing essay clichés are boring and difficult to read. Submitting such kind of papers to your professor is risky. He may judge you as a student who lacks writing creativity. This means low grades for you. Nevertheless, identification of a unique angle for the cliché, being specific and proofreading your work will guarantee you the production of an essay that is flawless and free from clichés. Ignore this advice at your own disadvantage.

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How to Avoid Cliché Topics in College Essays (and What To Do Instead)

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• Last updated on: September 23, 2022

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College essays can be a challenge to write, but you must make an impression on your professor. Unfortunately, some topics are so common they’re treated like cliches. Here’s how you can avoid cliché topics in your college essays and write with your creativity instead.

Why Should You Avoid Cliche Topics in College Essays?

You have a lot of reasons to avoid cliches in your college essays. It would be best if you avoided them because they are boring and unoriginal. They are also boring to read because they sound like everyone else’s essay. If you do not write about your unique personality and experiences, it will seem like all of your other classmates’ essays, making you look like a copycat.

Avoiding cliches is vital because it shows that you are aware of your uniqueness and want to be different from other students. It would be best if you also avoided them because they are not exciting topics for college essays. When you think of interesting topics for college essays, try thinking about things that have happened to you personally or something that has happened in the world around us recently.

If you do use a cliché in your essay, then you must make sure that you explain why the topic is relevant to your essay and how it relates to your specific situation. If not done correctly, this will only serve as an example of bad writing rather than a good one.

7 Cliché College Essay Topics to Avoid

College writing is one of the most challenging subjects. You’ll be tested on it just like any other subject, with no room for mercy. Unfortunately, some students still come up with overused college essay topics or ideas that are cliché and boring. If you want to write outstanding essays in college , here are seven common college application essay topics that should be avoided.

Highly Personal Topics

College essays are not the place to get personal. You can talk about your experiences and how they relate to what you’re learning in school, or you can write about a topic that interests you. But don’t try to be too cute with your approach and make it sound like you’re speaking directly to the reader. You want to sound like an expert, not a meme artist.

Personal Achievements and Accomplishments

If your goal is to brag about yourself, then this is not your essay topic. Instead, it would be best to focus on discussing what makes you unique, what sets you apart from others, and why you think that makes you an excellent candidate for admission to particular schools or programs. You might also consider writing about how your experiences have shaped your identity as a person who has achieved great things in your life.

Most Important Place or a Role Model

This is a cliché college essay topic to avoid. It may seem like an obvious point, but it is not. This type of writing makes the reader feel that there are no other essential topics to discuss; therefore, this is the only thing to write about.

Athletic Topics

While athletics play a role in education, it is not just about sports. It also includes academics, social life, health, and more. These topics are not very important in college essays and should be avoided if you want to get a good grade. Avoid using these topics in your paper if you want your essay to stand out from other students’ essays.

Humorous Topics or Jokes

Jokes and funny topics are not something college students want to write about. Even if they can write about them well, it would not be suitable for the overall topic of your essay. Therefore, try to avoid using such terms in your paper when writing an essay.

Travel Experience

Travel experience is a cliché topic, especially for students who have been to many places. Even if you have traveled extensively and have a great experience that you would like to share with the world, it will be easy for your audience to make assumptions about your travel experiences based on what they have heard or read about other people’s experiences.

Privilege or Luck

One of the most common clichés in college essays is to write about how lucky you are or how privileged you are. The problem with this line of thinking is that everyone sees it as an excuse for why they didn’t work hard enough or didn’t do what they had to do. Instead of explaining, you are just stating that you have been lucky enough to get into college.

7 Tips and Ideas to Help You Avoid Cliche Topics

Although it’s easy to find a topic you can write about. The more challenging part is finding a topic you aren’t bored with. Avoid cliche essay topics by having these tips and ideas below.

Show that You Belong at the School of Your Choice

You want to say something about why you love the school, which makes it more personal and shows that you care about the school and its students. If possible, talk about something specific from your life at this school.

If there is something specific like a class or club that you have been part of, talk about what made it special for you. For example, if a particular teacher inspired you in some way, tell us about them in detail so readers can get an impression of who they are and their influence on your life.

Share Something They Don’t Already Know About You

It would be best if you were yourself because that is who you are and what people like about you. Don’t try to be someone else or pretend to be something you are not.

You need to stay true to your personality and not try to hide any of your flaws or weaknesses. If you want someone else to like you, show them how much they can trust your talents and abilities. If someone does not trust your skills, it is better for them if they don’t get too close with you because they might end up disappointed by their past experiences with you.

Avoid Inflammatory Topics

When writing an essay, there are many things that you should keep in mind. One thing that you should do is avoid creating an inflammatory topic. An inflammatory topic makes it difficult for people to understand what you meant when writing your essay, which makes it difficult for them to understand what you wrote.

Share a Challenge Without Melodrama or Self-Pity

It is important not to let your emotions get in the way of your writing. The more you share, the more you risk losing your voice. After all, expressing yourself can be cathartic and therapeutic, but it’s also vital to remember that writing is first and foremost an art form. It’s not easy to get right at the best of times; it can seem impossible when you have no idea what you want to say.

Write About Culture and Identity with Sensitivity

If you want to write about culture and identity, then you need to know what those are in the first place. Before writing about them, it would be best if you defined them for yourself.

Culture is a set of customs, traditions, beliefs, and behaviors shared by a particular people; it includes their language, dress, art forms, and architecture. It can also have religious beliefs, which help define a group’s morals and ethics. Identity is one’s sense of self-worth based on one’s background, experiences, and preferences.

Avoid Focusing on a Single Event

If your essay is about one particular event or experience, you mustn’t focus on it too long. Instead, try to talk about other events and experiences that occurred during that time in your life and see how they relate to the first event or experience discussed in your essay.

Engage the Reader with Strong Writing

It’s important to remember that the first step in writing an essay is to have a purpose. This can be as simple as answering a question or trying to persuade someone else of your point of view. You might also have a specific goal, such as proving that a particular point of view is correct or changing someone’s mind about something.

In all cases, however, you should have something in mind when you start writing—something that will guide your thoughts throughout the rest of the process.

How to Write a College Essay That Stands Out?

If you are applying to college, you have probably already written an essay. But have you ever wondered how to make your college essay stand out from everyone else’s? These tips will help you create a great college essay that will be remembered.

Your First Paragraph Should Grab the Reader

The first paragraph of any essay should be a hook, a statement that grabs the reader and makes them want to continue. It can be an anecdote or an observation about the topic at hand.

A good hook will make your reader want to know more about what you have to say, but it should also be concise and to the point. Don’t ramble on about lots of details; instead, focus on one or two main issues that will help you set up the rest of your essay.

Don’t Be Boring

It’s hard to imagine, but you have to be original, or you don’t stand out from the crowd. In other words, if everyone copies their friends’ essays, they’ll look like copycats and won’t get noticed.

This doesn’t mean you can’t make use of your favorite authors and books. You can quote them in your essay, but make sure you don’t overdo it. Remember that good writing is concise and powerful. Quoting too many authors will make your essay sound boring and unoriginal.

Approach the Essay from a Different Angle

Although it might seem like a simple task, you have to think of something different and unique. Think about what has never been done before and use this to your advantage in writing.

The first thing you need to do is write down what you will do. This step can be done in any way that works for you and will help you get started on your essay. You should start by writing down what type of paper it is, such as an expository or argumentative essay, and then think about how you will approach it.

Another thing you need to consider when writing an essay is whether or not there are any topics you want to cover in-depth or touch upon briefly and move on with your paper. If this is the case, then give yourself more time than if there aren’t any topics that interest you personally anymore or if there are too many topics that require too much time spent on them.

Be Clear and Logical

A great college essay will always be clear and logical. It should be easy to read and understand. The best way to achieve this is by keeping your paragraphs short, but they don’t have to be boring or dry.

In addition to being clear and logical, your college essay should also be interesting. There are plenty of ways to get people interested in your work: use vivid images, personal anecdotes, or stories from someone else’s life. You want readers to engage with your work; if you can make them laugh or cry, that’s even better.

Leave Your Reader with a Lasting Impression

The best way to write a college essay is to go beyond the obvious and to make your readers think about the points you raise. In other words, it’s not enough to summarize what you learned in class or how you did on the quiz. It would be best if you looked for ways to make your reader think about the issue and respond with something original.

The most effective way to do this is to evoke a feeling of despair or hope in the reader. The trick is not just to make them feel the emotion but also to make them care about it.

Wrapping Things Up: How to Avoid Cliches Topics in College Essays (and What to Do Instead)

So much goes into writing a college application essay, which can be stressful. With so many unique individuals aspiring to college these days, essays are more important than ever. Knowing the right way to get your message across without coming across as a cliche is a key to standing out in the crowd.

That does not mean that writing a creative essay for college is impossible. There are some things to keep in mind when choosing good topics for college essays. These pointers can help you to develop an effective essay that has something new and original to say. This can ensure that you capture the imagination of those reading your work.

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5 College Admissions Essay Clichés to Avoid

by Gail Kerzner | Aug 31, 2021 | College Admissions Essays , Tips and Tricks

For high school seniors, fall doesn’t just mean time to reunite with friends and back-to-school shopping—complete with sparkly notebooks. It means super serious college prep and the scary realization that many college admissions essay deadlines are eminent—as early as November 1 for early decision. When admissions essays rank as one of the most important components of your college application (made even more so by many colleges and universities making test scores optional for this year’s round of admissions), it’s important to get your essay right. With more than 6 million first-year applications submitted each year , through the CommonApp alone, you can imagine there are some themes that are repeated among applicants’ essays. Knowing how to avoid these college admissions essay clichés and stand out from the crowd can tip the scales in your favor, leading to a beautiful, thick acceptance envelope to your first pick arriving in your mailbox (email or even snail mail).

Why You Should Avoid College Admissions Essay Clichés

College admissions essays are 650-word documents that can make or break a student’s admission. A compelling application essay should show passion, purpose, and character—especially empathy and resilience. Colleges need to believe a candidate will be a star in their college communities and ultimately be a good investment in advancing the university’s reputation and esteem. Students need to set themselves apart from a lengthy list of applicants and be remembered for the right reasons, not because they offer yet another cliché essay about being an athlete, scholar, community servant, or child of an inspirational parent. Instead, students need to pique their interest with the unexpected.

So, what exactly is a clichéd essay topic? According to Merriam-Webster, it’s a “common thought or idea that has lost all originality, ingenuity, or impact by long overuse.” If you want your application essay to have an impact, you’ll want to learn how to avoid these common clichés.

How to Avoid These 5 College Admissions Essay Clichés

So, what’s the major advice to students crafting these pithy descriptions of what makes them tick? Avoid cliché college admissions essay topics. Paint a picture of your personality and experience. Individuals are unique, so it’s crucial to describe a unique point of view toward these five topics. The topics are predictable, so your approach needs to be distinctive or the admissions officer will toss your essay, and you, aside. Ouch.

Sports—The Big Game

“The thrill of victory, the agony of defeat.” Count the short stories, novels, and movies based on this lesson: the winning basket or home run in the last seconds or inning. They are endless. The popularity of such accounts makes sense because the lessons are inspirational. The problem is these lessons can be formulaic: winning isn’t everything, never give up, practice pays off, being a team player is crucial. The message is predictable, which makes it clichéd. With that being said, I understand how formative these moments may be in the lives of the students I work with. So how can you still write about how your dedication to your sport has positively impacted who you are? Read on.

What to do:

Consider writing about how you turned a negative situation into a positive one. Did your sports injury “force” you into pursuing a special activity you had never tried before? Did the pressure to perform backfire? Think about recounting the unexpected. Make sure your story does not follow the standard “formula” and surprises your readers.

I’m sorry be flippant about this, but by the time students apply for college, they’ve probably been affected by a death, whether of a parent, grandparent, friend, or pet. These experiences often affect us profoundly and shape our character. Unfortunately, writing about them often results in trite lessons, such as “make each day count” or “life is too short.” And often the approach to the topic is too broad.

What to do: 

Focus on a specific way in which the death changed your life, such as altering your role in the family. Did a profound awareness of a disease turn you into an active advocate or fundraiser?

Added note: Other Ds—divorce, depression—also fall into this category.

Immigration

Immigrant stories in the U.S are plentiful. We are, after all, the land of the dreamers. So, you had to learn a new language—so, you had to figure out how to fit in—so, you had to adjust to a new lifestyle—you and thousands of others. That is not to discount how challenging it can be to make a new place your home, but how is your experience different?

Be specific. Choose a stand-out moment of conflict or distinctive experience and put the admissions officer in your shoes. For example, what was the dialogue between you and your new best American friend about the 4 th of July? Or maybe you can freeze the moment when your neighbor launched a slur into your ears.

So, you adore your mom—you and everyone else (at least many students). While a student’s personal relationship with a parent, teacher, or coach is just that—personal—the way the student tells the story is the key to standing out. Simply being influenced by someone is not special, and the influence is often predictable: self-discovery, life discovery, world discovery.

The focus needs to be on the student, not totally on the role model, unless Mom is the first female whatever and Grandpa is the inventor of the latest gizmo.

Focus on how you exemplified a quality you admire in another person. How are you trying to model someone else’s ethics?

Community Service

So, you volunteered—so what? Community service is pretty much a requirement for high school students these days, so the act of volunteering alone doesn’t show remarkable initiative. So, you volunteered at the local food bank or helped build a house in Nicaragua. Yawn. So have thousands of other students.

Trust me, college admissions officers want to see evidence of compassion, but they don’t want to read yet another essay in which the aha moment is predictable such as:

• I now realize how fortunate I am.
• I didn’t realize such poverty existed.

This approach might also come across as privileged—which is so not impressive and memorable in a negative way.

Zero in on a specific person you helped in a specific way. Recount a conversation you had. Freeze a moment in time. And be sincere.

Bonus Category: Rehashing Your Resume

Never rehash your resume. This is a wasted opportunity because you’re only presenting 650 words on information that appears somewhere else in your application—your activities, your grades, your test scores.

Bonus Tip: Avoid Cliché Language

Scratch off lessons learned such as:

• Don’t judge a book by its cover.
• If at once you don’t succeed, try, try again.
• Never bite off more than you can chew.
• Never give up.
• Beauty is in the eye of the beholder.
• When life gives you lemons, make lemonade.

Avoiding these cliché topics and phrases will keep admissions officers from nodding off or rolling their eyes. Be original. And don’t forget to start working on essays early (like, now ), get help, and develop a plan.

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What this handout is about

This handout discusses clichés and why you should generally avoid them in order to achieve specificity in both your academic writing and your application essays.

Introduction: What’s so bad about clichés?

Let’s say you are on a study abroad applications review committee. You are responsible for making sure a limited amount of money goes to the most qualified applicants…and you have to read through hundreds of application essays! Here are two personal statements:

I’m a people person, so I am certain to get along well with new people in a strange country. I know how to adapt, because I’m a jack-of-all-trades. I am also prepared to deal with adversity and learn from challenges because I know that every cloud has a silver lining.

I will be able to immerse myself in another country because I have experience as an ESL tutor interacting with people from diverse cultural backgrounds. Growing up in a military family taught me how to quickly adapt to new people and environments. I won’t let the inevitable challenges of living abroad deter me from my educational goals. As my numerous failed experiments for my chemistry senior project show, challenges are profitable in the long-run. I finally made a contribution to my field after 200 experiments!

Who gets the money? Both applicants made the same basic argument about themselves. But the second did it with more specificity—in other words, by using detailed evidence to reinforce their more general claims about themselves. The first applicant relied on clichés—“I’m a people person,” “jack-of-all-trades,” “every cloud as a silver lining”—that anybody could have used. We didn’t learn anything specific about this person. The second applicant gets the money.

This example shows the problem with clichés—they are general statements that do not add any detailed evidence or unique support to a piece of writing, whether that writing is a personal statement or an academic essay.

What is a cliché?

Clichés are expressions that either have a general meaning or have “lost their meaning” over time. These overused phrases do not provide a specific meaning or image. You are probably familiar with many of them, although you might find it difficult to pinpoint their exact definition. Some are idioms, where the figurative meaning of a group of words is different from the literal definition. For example, “The devil is in the details” should hopefully not be taken literally! Other clichés may once have possessed a precise meaning that made them creative metaphors, but they have now lost their edge because that specific definition has been forgotten or dulled through overuse. “Survival of the fittest” once evoked Charles Darwin’s theory of evolution through natural selection. Because readers have largely lost this unique context, the phrase has also lost the specificity which may have once made it a potent metaphor. Clichés can also obscure fully-developed ideas by serving as placeholders for a more sophisticated discussion. Clichés lack specificity and complexity; therefore, they do not make distinctive or memorable contributions to your writing.

What are some examples of clichés?

We’ve divided some common clichés into categories based on the genre in which you might encounter them. Follow the links at the end of this handout for much more comprehensive lists of clichés.

Academic Writing – especially in formulaic introductions or conclusions (see our handouts on introductions and conclusions to make sure that you don’t start or end your papers with clichés):

• In modern society
• Throughout history (Be warned: History TAs hate this one!)
• In this day and age
• In the current climate
• From the dawn of man (Historians are also not fond of this one!)

Application Essays – where talking about yourself can lead to getting mushy and using clichés (check out our handout on application essays to make your personal statements specific and effective):

• Good things come to those who wait
• Every cloud has a silver lining
• Little did I know
• I learned more from them than they did from me
• Every rose has its thorn
• The time of my life

Any type of writing:

• In the nick of time
• Opposites attract
• You win some, you lose some
• Easy come, easy go

Why shouldn’t you use clichés?

Clichés are usually not acceptable in academic writing, although some may be effective in daily conversation and less formal writing. Evaluate the context of your writing and be aware that you’re making a choice when you use them.

• Clichés make you seem boring. By using a cliché, you’re telling your reader that you lack originality, making them want to yawn and stop reading your paper.
• Clichés make your writing and argument interchangeable with anybody else’s. Make sure that your argument and writing are specific to you and your writing task.
• Clichés are vague. It is best to use the most precise wording in order to present evidence and support your arguments as clearly as possible. Specific details and explanations make better evidence than generalizations and trite phrases.
• Clichés make you seem lazy. They are a hedge when you don’t want to do creative work.
• Clichés make you lose credibility. Your reader will not trust you as an authoritative source if you can’t come up with a better description than a cliché.
• Clichés are poor substitutes for actual evidence. Because clichés are not specific, they do not offer strong enough commentary to prove your point. Make sure that every sentence of your paper is working toward a goal by eliminating meaningless phrases.

How to tell when you’re using a cliché

• If instructors provide feedback such as “too general,” “vague,” or “be more specific,” what they might really mean is that your writing relies on clichés.
• Ask a friend to listen as you read your writing out loud. If they can finish any sentence before you read the whole thing, you have probably employed a cliché.
• Read through your writing alone. Read it slowly and out loud, stopping often to develop mental pictures that reflect what you have written. If you’re writing a paper that needs to be descriptive, do all of your sentences evoke strong images? If you’re writing about something theoretical or persuasive, are all of your points specific and clear? If something is easy to skip over or you can’t assign a direct meaning to it, go back! You may have a cliché.
• Ask yourself if what you’ve written is a product of your research, an original argument, or a portrayal of your personal experiences. Could what you wrote appear in anyone else’s essay? If so, you may be relying on clichés. No other writer has had exactly the same personal experiences as you, conducted the same research, or formulated the same arguments.
• Look through your introduction and your conclusion. Often writers rely on clichés to power through what many consider to be the most difficult sections of a paper. If you’re using phrases that sound like they could belong in any generic paper, chances are they’re not serving you well. Of course, you may reuse certain transition words or forms of argument in multiple papers, but try to avoid hackneyed phrases like “Throughout history…” or “In conclusion…”

How to get rid of clichés

• Research or brainstorm some more. If you are relying on clichés, you might not have prepared enough for your writing assignment. Check out our brainstorming handout . If you think you may be relying on clichés instead of actual evidence, consult our handout on evidence for clarification.
• Stop and think about what you’re trying to say. What do you really mean? Say your answer out loud and then write it down. List the main ideas that you want to convey in each sentence, and then list synonyms of each idea underneath. Pull out a thesaurus if necessary. This method leaves you with a list of many words, and you can pick the most fitting combination.
• Try to pinpoint exactly what you want to say, and write it! Often, keeping it simple is a good idea.
• Ask yourself questions as you write. Use “who,” “what,” “when,” “where,” “why,” and “how” questions to spur your thinking. Rather than writing “throughout history” as your introductory line, stop and ask yourself, “When? In what era? Where? Who was in power during the specific historical context I am addressing?” The answers to these questions will give you a more focused opening line. For example, imagine you’re writing a paper about papal history. Rather than saying something generic such as, “Throughout history, only two popes have resigned,” you can write something better with the help of a little research. You could end up with the more precise: “In what represented a nearly unprecedented departure from papal tradition, Pope Benedict XVI became the second pope to resign in 2013.”

Consult these resources for lists of clichés:

Cliché List: Definition, Meaning & Examples. http://www.clichelist.net/

Examples of Clichés. http://examples.yourdictionary.com/examples-of-cliches.html

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The 3 Most Common College Essay Topic Clichés and How to Cure Them

1. The “Person I Admire” Essay

Is your dad the most important person in your life? Have you recently been coping with the death of a loved one? Do you plan on following in the footsteps of your high school mentor? Believe it or not, more than one person reading this article answered “yes” to at least one of those questions. Although we all have different relationships with the people we admire, essays on this subject often veer off the narrative cliff into an ocean of similar sob stories. These stories also run the risk of focusing too much on the influential figure or family member and not enough on the student writing the essay.

Remember, this is YOUR college application – not your grandpa’s, not Abraham Lincoln’s. Admissions wants to know about YOU, and what makes you a uniquely good fit for their school. If a person has had a significant impact on your life – sad or happy, negative or positive – focus on one important moment in that relationship. If you want to be just like your dad, when did you realize this? If your mother was sick, how did you help her manage her illness, and what did you learn about your own abilities to face life’s greatest challenges? Is there an unexpected way you can find joy or hope in a moment of sadness? Telling a simple story that is specific to your own life and experience will make all the difference here.

2. The Sports Essay

The crowd goes wild as you score the winning touchdown and are carried off the backs of your teammates….in a cast! Because you did the whole thing with a broken leg! Victories, injuries, and teamwork are the most common themes sloshing around the bucket of vague sports essays. This topic presents an opportunity for students to describe how they surmount different kinds of obstacles – an opportunity almost everyone takes. Surprisingly, the challenges of playing soccer in Ohio are quite similar to those of playing baseball in Montana. And serious athletes with sports-heavy resumes who also write about sports run the risk of boring admissions to tears with their one-note applications.

The sports essay is actually a huge arena in which a student can showcase his or her creativity. It’s time to abandon the simple narratives of bones broken and medals won. Put your unique perspective on display by describing how the skills you gained from athletics transfer to other areas of your life (or vice versa). Turn your favorite sport into a metaphor to describe another aspect of who you are. Or, if you still can’t resist telling one of the more common kinds of sports stories, dig into the details of that story. Try to isolate a small moment within the larger story that was significant or surprising. A victory isn’t just about winning or teamwork – maybe it’s also about the way your friend made you laugh on the bus before you even set foot on the field.

3. The Volunteering Essay

“…but it turns out that, when I thought I was helping them, all along they were really helping me.” Stop! Pull at our heartstrings no longer! If you, too, have been changed by your community service, you are not alone. That is an amazing side effect of doing good deeds that affect others. Millions of students across the country and around the globe donate their time to worthy causes (something that makes us very happy), but the mere act of volunteering is no longer enough to distinguish you from your competitors. Common pitfalls of the volunteering essay include saccharine storytelling, repeating your resume, and parroting the Wikipedia page of your organization of choice.

Ideally, you should donate your time to a cause that is truly significant to you. Thousands of people do the Breast Cancer walk every year. They all follow the same route and see the same sights, but what about the story that led up to you taking that first step? Ideally, the service itself should be the reward – not the “lessons learned” from the people who benefit from your service. Or, if you truly experienced personal growth through volunteering, try to isolate a particular moment or relationship that can illustrate the change you observed in yourself. Showing, not telling, is the key to writing a unique and engaging volunteering essay.

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3 Fixes for Cliche College Application Essay Topics

by j9robinson | Apr 19, 2017

Should You Write About a Cliche Topic for Your College Application Essay?

If you are just starting brainstorming ideas for your college application essays, one of the first pieces of advice you might stumble upon is to avoid “cliche” topics.

I always warn my students about these often over-used topics, which can include:

Death of loved ones

Sports (especially injuries and victories/losses)

Mission trips (volunteering)

Tutoring (especially special needs kids)

Travel (family trips)

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The main reason to avoid them is that droves of other students have already written about these topics, so they aren’t as effective at helping you differentiate yourself from other applicants.

HOWEVER…

I have seen numerous college application essays—and some of the best ones, in fact—on these exact red-flagged topics.

While it’s helpful to recognize potentially cliche topics, you can still write a brilliant essay about them.

As I like to say about ALL college essay topics, it’s what you have to say about them  that matters the most.

The challenge with cliche topics is that often students tend to say the same thing about them, which only makes them worse.

For example, if you write about the loss of a loved one, and you mainly share how terrible it made you feel and how it made you now appreciate all your living loved ones, and you include only general observations like that, your essay could fail to rise above its cliche status.

The trick is to find a way to shift your cliche topic beyond the predictable.

Here Are Three Tips to Fix a Cliche Topic

1. Find a unique angle about the cliche topic

If you are kicking around writing about one of these red-flagged topics, look for a unique ANGLE.

An “angle” in writing means the point you want to make about your topic in your essay.

If you can find an unusual point to make about a cliche topic, or how you relate somehow to this topic, your essay could go from trite and dull to fresh and surprising.

For example, one student wrote about the sport of crew.

Despite the overdone sports theme, his essay was excellent because he found a unique point to make about crew, which reflected on how it shaped his character.

His essay made the point that crew taught him how to find his “crazy” side from the intense physical and especially mental challenges.

If he had simply written about a race he won, or lost, his essay would have been more cliche.

Or if he wrote about learning that hard work paid off, or something generic like that, it would have been cliche.

Instead, he featured this unusual point or “angle” about almost going crazy—and went on to explain how he applied that intense energy to other endeavors in his life.

And that made all the difference.

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2. Give it a twist

A twist is similar to an angle, but it’s more about what happened in your essay than your unique point you want to make.

To find a twist, look for a way to find something unexpected that involved you and your topic.

Maybe you learned something from dealing with it that surprised you.

One former student wrote about taking a family trip in a large camper with lots of siblings for half her summer that she dreaded. But then she discovered some unexpected pleasures and lessons along the way—mainly about herself.

Another student wrote about not getting her typical starring role in the school musical, and how she learned the value of being a supportive actress and person.

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3. Make the cliche topic itself more specific

If you can make the cliche topic itself more specific—a topic within a topic—often you will make it more original and different.

For instance, if you want to write about sports, and pick football or basketball or running, those are especially challenging to find new things to write about them since they are so popular.

(And admissions officers have probably read many essays about those popular sports for the same reason.)

It’s not impossible to write about the more popular sports, especially if you apply Tips #1 or #2 to the topic. But know it won’t be easy.

If you participate in a sport that is unique in itself, however, such as pole-vaulting, bobsledding, yo-yo-ing, karate, fencing, or other less popular sports, it could be easier to write an essay that doesn’t express the same old stories about winning the state championship or injuring an ACL.

Or maybe you have a physical feature that should have kept you from excelling at that sport (your twist), such as being under 5′ and being a basketball star, or a girl playing football (sadly this is still pretty uncommon), or water polo and having to learn to swim. (You get my drift.)

Again, it’s what you have to say about it.

If you want to write about your mission trip to Africa, make sure to find something specific and unique that happened to you while on that trip, and focus on that and what you learned (as opposed to writing about just the trip itself).

Often, if you can think of something that happened to you related to your cliche topic that is different, unique or unusual, that could set it apart from other essays on the same topic.

Do the Extra Work if You Pick a Cliche Topic

The main reason these cliche topics often make lousy essays is that students say the same general, predictable things about them.

If you can find something different or unique to share about them—either about what happened to you or what you learned—they are no longer cliche.

You mainly need to dig deeper with your ideas and stories, and get more creative and insightful about your personal experience.

So don’t cross these off your topic brainstorm list—yet.

Just know they will require extra work to make your essays awesome.

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65 Clichés to Avoid Using in Your Common App Essay

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Admissions officers read a lot of admissions essays, so there are quite a few clich és to avoid using whenever possible. For many students, a primary source of stress throughout the college application process is the persistent sense that their applications will not “stand out” to admissions officers.

Frequently, this stress manifests in the form of essay anxiety, here taken to mean the fear associated with the feeling that one’s essay is not original, creative, impactful, or eye-catching. There is some basis to these fears; in reality, admissions officers read thousands of applications and essays in a very limited amount of time, and this necessitates some degree of “skimming.” In this sense, if the student’s essay doesn’t contain something immediately compelling, the application may be overlooked.

However, while this fear may have some degree of logical grounding, it is not a productive, nor necessary, fear to have. In truth, it is possible to intentionally craft an essay that stands out; one need not leave the success of an essay up to luck or some romanticized notion of divine inspiration. There are concrete tips to follow that can substantially improve the quality of an essay. One such piece of advice? Avoid clichés.

Let’s break that down

This directive ought to come as no shock. Most students know the clichéd topics to avoid in their Common Application essays—” the service trip or volunteer work essay, the sports game essay, a standard response to the death of someone important, the admiration/tribute essay. However, when it comes to the content of the essay itself, many students will see their original and creative essays lost in an amalgamation of cliched phrases. In the following list, partially drawn from Be a Better Writer’s “ 681 Cliches to Avoid in Your Creative Writing ,” I will address some top college essay-specific clichés that students may want to forgo.

65 clich és to watch

• “… in this day and age …” 
• “… little did I know …”
• “… the time of my life …”
• “… silver lining …”
• “… against all odds …”
• “… back to square one …”
• “… it all came down to …”
• “… calm before the storm …”
• “… blood, sweat, and tears …” 
• “… cross that bridge when we come to it …” 
• “… go the extra mile …”
• “… go with the flow …”
• “… cried my eyes out …”
• “… down to earth …”
• “… easier said than done …” 
• “… be all, end all …” 
• “… bend over backwards …” 
• “… every fiber of my being …”
• “… think outside the box …”
• “… eye for an eye …” 
• “… follow my heart …”
• “… for all intents and purposes …” 
• “… benefit of the doubt …”
• “… force to be reckoned with …” 
• “… in over my head …” 
• “… forgive and forget …”
• “… get to the bottom of …”
• “… goes without saying …”
• “… could have heard a pin drop …”
• “… beg to differ …”
• “… in my element …”
• “… to each her own …”
• “… too good to be true …”
• “… judge a book by its cover …” 
• “… keep my head/chin up …”
• “… like there was no tomorrow …” v
• “… make the best of it …”
• “… at the end of the day …”
• “… never look back …”
• “… never say never …”
• “… not the end of the world …” 
• “… on the tip of my tongue …” 
• “… one in a million …”
• “… pillar of the community …” 
• “… scared to death …”
• “… even the playing field …”
• “… see eye to eye …”
• “… seize the day …” 
• “… last but not least …”
• “… light at the end of the tunnel …” 
• “… put my best foot forward …”
• “… sigh of relief …” 
• “… stop and smell the roses …” 
• “… take one for the team …”
• “… made my day …”
• “… moment of truth …” 
• “… time and time again …” 
• “… to the best of my knowledge …” 
• “… not to mention …”
• “… wakeup call …” 
• “… worst nightmare …” 
• “… you only live once …” 
• “… to be honest …”
• “… let’s face it …”
• “… gave it my all …” 

In conclusion

Though this is by no means an exhaustive list of all the possible clichés a student might use, hopefully it can provide a solid starting point. If you find that your essay contains one or more of these phrases, search for alternative ways to say them. Even better perhaps, do a bit of introspection to find a more precise way to say what you feel.  At least, now you know which clich és to avoid when you see them coming!

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Published on September 21, 2021 by Kirsten Courault . Revised on June 1, 2023.

Unlike an academic essay, the college application essay does not require a formal tone. It gives you a chance to showcase your authentic voice and creative writing abilities. Here are some basic guidelines for using an appropriate style and tone in your college essay.

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Use a conversational yet respectful tone, as if speaking with a familiar teacher, mentor, or coach. An academic, formal tone will seem too clinical, while an overly casual tone will seem unprofessional to admissions officers.

Find an appropriate middle ground without pedantic language or slang. For example, contractions are acceptable, but text message abbreviations are not.

Note that “Why this college?” essays , scholarship essays , and diversity essays are usually similarly conversational in tone.

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Your essay shouldn’t read like a professor, parent, or friend wrote it for you. Use first-person singular “I” statements, appropriate vocabulary for your level, and original expressions.

Prioritize using the first-person singular

Unlike in some other kinds of academic writing, you should write in the first-person singular (e.g., “I,” “me”) in a college application essay to highlight your perspective.

Avoid using “one” for generalizations , since this sounds stilted and unnatural. Use “we” sparingly to avoid projecting your opinions or beliefs onto other people who may not share the same views. In some cases, you can use “we” to talk about a community you know well, such as your family or neighborhood.

The second-person pronoun “you” can be used in some cases. Don’t write the whole essay to an unknown “you,” but if the narrative calls for it, occasionally addressing readers as “you” is generally okay.

Write within your vocabulary range

Creative but careful word choice is essential to enliven your essay. You should embellish basic words, but it shouldn’t read like you used a thesaurus to impress admissions officers.

Use clichés and idioms with discretion

Find a more imaginative way of rewriting overused expressions一unless it’s an intentional stylistic choice.

Write concisely and in the active voice to maintain a quick pace throughout your essay. Only add definitions if they provide necessary explanation.

Write concisely

Opt for a simple, concise way of writing, unless it’s a deliberate stylistic choice to describe a scene. Be intentional with every word, especially since college essays have word limits. However, do vary the length of your sentences to create an interesting flow.

Don’t provide definitions just to sound smart

You should explain terms or concepts that may be unfamiliar to the reader. However, don’t show off with several definitions to impress admissions officers.

Prioritize the active voice to maintain a lively tone

The passive voice can be used when the subject is unimportant or unknown. But in most cases, use the active voice to keep a fast pace throughout your essay.

If it seems hard to find the right tone and voice for your college essay, there are tools that can help.

One of these tools is the paraphrasing tool .

To begin, you can type or copy text you’ve already written into the tool.

After that, select a paraphrasing mode (e.g., fluency for better flowing text) that will rewrite your college essay accordingly.

You can occasionally bend grammatical rules if it adds value to the storytelling process and the essay maintains clarity. This can help your writing stand out from the crowd. However, return to using standard language rules if your stylistic choices would otherwise distract the reader from your overall narrative or could be easily interpreted as unintentional errors.

Sentence fragments

Sentence fragments can convey a quicker pace, a more immediate tone, and intense emotion in your essay. Use them sparingly, as too many fragments can be choppy, confusing, and distracting.

Non-standard capitalization

Usually,  common nouns should not be capitalized . But sometimes capitalization can be an effective tool to insert humor or signify importance.

For international students applying to US colleges, it’s important to remember to use US English rather than UK English .

For example, use double quotation marks rather than single ones, and don’t forget to put punctuation inside the double quotation marks. Also be careful to use American spelling, which can differ by just one or two letters from British spelling.

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College application essays are less formal than other kinds of academic writing . Use a conversational yet respectful tone , as if speaking with a teacher or mentor. Be vulnerable about your feelings, thoughts, and experiences to connect with the reader.

Aim to write in your authentic voice , with a style that sounds natural and genuine. You can be creative with your word choice, but don’t use elaborate vocabulary to impress admissions officers.

Use first-person “I” statements to speak from your perspective . Use appropriate word choices that show off your vocabulary but don’t sound like you used a thesaurus. Avoid using idioms or cliché expressions by rewriting them in a creative, original way.

Write concisely and use the active voice to maintain a quick pace throughout your essay and make sure it’s the right length . Avoid adding definitions unless they provide necessary explanation.

In a college application essay , you can occasionally bend grammatical rules if doing so adds value to the storytelling process and the essay maintains clarity.

However, use standard language rules if your stylistic choices would otherwise distract the reader from your overall narrative or could be easily interpreted as unintentional errors.

A college application essay is less formal than most academic writing . Instead of citing sources formally with in-text citations and a reference list, you can cite them informally in your text.

For example, “In her research paper on genetics, Quinn Roberts explores …”

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